Chapter I. “As told by the giantess Gull”

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  • Overall, I really like your color choices and the impressionistic appearance of your art. Although, it does make it difficult in some places to understand what is happening action wise.

    Fantasy really isn’t my genre, so it might be 100% me and my lack of comprehension, but I personally don’t get what is happening. I read it through two times and still don’t quite get it. Are the dragons transforming into cave people?

    I’ll keep reading and commenting.

    A little grammatical correction: “That was the moment I realized that to them singing was the only way they new to i nterpret their world.”

    It should be “KNEW” not “NEW” and delete the space between “I” and “NTERPRET.”

    • Oh they are transforming into cave people. I just read your Synopsis and saw that. So I guess it is inferred, but I personally would like to see it more clearly portrayed.

      Perhaps an additional page showing the transformation, the stages of morphing, would help.

      • mckaren

        I have to give myself a time to draw a cool transformation, probably in an upcoming chapter. That’s very likely.

    • mckaren

      Hi, thanks for your comment! Well, I’m trying to get things more clear while I keep going through the story, though I have a very big universe and sometimes it’s hard to watch thing from other perspective than mine and see what I have to explain and what not @_@ oh, and I have to fix that typo, haha

  • Sean Luke McCard

    Overall, I really like your color choices and the impressionistic appearance of your art. Although, it does make it difficult in some places to understand what is happening action wise.
    Fantasy really isn’t my genre, so it might be 100% me and my lack of comprehension, but I personally don’t get what is happening. I read it through two times and still don’t quite get it. Are the dragons transforming into cave people?

    I’ll keep reading and commenting.

    A little grammatical correction: “That was the moment I realized that to them singing was the only way they new to i nterpret their world.”

    It should be “KNEW” not “NEW” and delete the space between “I” and “NTERPRET.”

    • Hi, thanks for your comment! Well, I’m trying to get things more clear while I keep going through the story, though I have a very big universe and sometimes it’s hard to watch thing from other perspective than mine and see what I have to explain and what not @_@ oh, and I have to fix that typo, haha

  • Sean Luke McCard

    Oh they are transforming into cave people. I just read your Synopsis and saw that. So I guess it is inferred, but I personally would like to see it more clearly portrayed.

    Perhaps an additional page showing the transformation, the stages of morphing, would help.

    • I have to give myself a time to draw a cool transformation, probably in an upcoming chapter. That’s very likely.